Zero-257's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[R> Only Oijoink Knows]

Who knows what now ?

The animation was decent yet lacking any actual closure. All we got from that was "Oijoink Knows" something about someone.

Perhaps continue the animation with a sequel or extend it so that it will explain in greater detail what's going on.

Finally, don't assume people won't replay. For the sake of reviewing it I would've actually used it.

PS: If all you wanted was to say "Only Oijoink Knows" without going into detail and without explaining the context properly I really hope this gets blammed.

Oijoink responds:

You're the man now, dude!

[Naruto Bloopers Ep.5]

Not bad

I see that you have a keen eye, and I didn't blam this since the point was indeed to show actual mistakes (I thought it was a parody at first).

One a side note, every Anime is made by a Team of Artists, you can't expect them to draw exactly the same, however the more they Draw, the better they get at it, thus the latest Naruto Anime doesn't have as many mistakes, and it's style is quite different then the original one.

HyperRaider responds:

I know this but its still fun to show the facts ;)

[Rebel Cursors!]

Needs more work

Problems with your animation:

1) Needs more realism, for example the initial screen isn't something Windows shows, the Door isn't either.
2) The cursors weren't very original (they could, for example, turn into a sword and cut things), they didn't even have to start with the common Windows cursor.
3) The explosions could have been much better, Instead of exploding the Desktop, you could actually explode the Computer, that way the viewers would "feel" a bigger impact.

If you take some time to improve it, I am certain you'll be able to do a better animation.

PS: Don't forget to include "All copyrights belong to their respective owners" if you use Copyrighted stuff.

MiCrOsCo-PuCe responds:

Ok. Thx very much for the tips. :)